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GRE 考试|GRE作文点评:从思想到语言的深度a

来源:www.cheyunhui.com 2025-01-28

Issue 12

Anyone can make things bigger and more complex. What requires real effort and courage is to move in the opposite directionin other words, to make things as simple as possible.

Whether making things simple requires greater effort and courage than making them bigger and more complex depends on the sort of effort and courage. Indisputably, the many complex technological1 marvels2 that are part-and-parcel of our Lives today are the result of the extraordinary cumulative3 efforts of our engineers, entrepreneurs, and others. And, such achievements always call for the courage to risk failing in a large way. Yet, humans seem naturally driven to make things bigger and more complex; thus refraining from doing so, or reversing this natural process, takes considerable effort and courage of a different sort, as discussed below.

精华:Indisputably,part-and-parcel of = necessity/essentiality of必不可少的部分

The statement brings immediately to mind the ever-growing and increasingly complex digital world. Today's high-tech4 firms seem compelled to boldly go to whatever effort is required to devise increasingly complex products, for the ostensible5 purpose of staying ahead of their competitors. Yet, the sort of effort and courage to which the statement refers is a different onebred of vision, imagination, and a willingness to forego near term profits for the prospect6 of making lasting7 contributions. Surely, a number of entrepreneurs and engineers today are mastering that courage, and are making the effort to create far simpler, yet more elegant,technologies and applications, which will truly make our lives simpler in sharp contrast to what computer technology has delivered to us so far.

精华:seem compelled to boldly go to whatever effort is required to for the ostensible purpose ofstay ahead of

a different onebred of vision, imagination, and a willingness to forego near term profits for the prospect of making lasting contributions in sharp contrast to what computer technology has delivered to us so far

Lending even more credence8 to the statement is the so-called big governmentphenomenon. Human societies have a natural tendency to create unwieldy bureaucracies, a fitting example of which is the U.S. tax-law system. The Internal Revenue Code and its accompanying Treasury9 Regulations have grown so voluminous and complex that many certified10 accountants and tax attorneys admit that they cannot begin to understand it all.Admittedly, this system has grown only through considerable effort on the part of all three branches of the federal government, not to mention the efforts of many special interest groups.Yet, therein lies the statement's credibility. It requires great effort and courage on the part of a legislator to risk alienating11 special interest groups, thereby12 risking reelection prospects13, by standing14 on principle for a simpler tax system that is less cosplaytly15 to administer and better serves the interests of most taxpayers16.

精华:Lending even more credence to the statement is

stand on principle for

Adding further credibility to the statement is the tendency of most people to complicate17 their personal livesa tendency that seems especially strong in today's age of technology and consumerism. The greater our mobility18, the greater our number of destinations each day; the more time-saving gadgets19 we use, the more activities we try to pack into our day; and with readier access to information we try to assimilate more of it each day. I am hard-pressed to think of one person who has ever exclaimed to me how much effort and courage it has taken to complicate his or her life in these respects. In contrast, a certain self-restraint and courage of conviction are both required to eschew20 modern conveniences, to simplify one's daily schedule,and to establish and adhere to a simple plan for the use of one's time and money.

In sum, whether we are building computer networks, government agencies, or personal lifestyles, great effort and courage are required to make things simple, or to keep them that way. Moreover, because humans naturally tend to make things big and complex, it arguably requires more effort and courage to move in the opposite direction. In the final analysis,making things simpleor keeping them that waytakes a brand of effort born of reflection and restraint rather than sheer exertion21, and a courage character and conviction rather than unbridled ambition.


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